You should make it a firm rule to read your story through several times before handing it in. Our next paragraph tells them that we are going back to the beginning of the story: Notice that we split key point g into two halves.
This is, however, very complicated and may confuse your reader or listener. This will demonstrate both of the other approaches. Our finished version should now look like this: However, they believe that Honiara has been the worst hit.
What is going to happen to all the homeless people? The original phrase was just jargon. Have you chosen the key points? Or we can use a combination of these two approaches, i. It would be possible to write the rest of the story by choosing more key points from the information left, ranking them according to newsworthiness then writing them in order.
Remember that we decided that e and d were the most newsworthy key points because they best filled the four criteria for news: Inexperienced journalists are often so relieved that they have actually written a story that they forget to check it properly.
You might show them the centre of the village first, then move to the outer buildings, and finish with the river and the food gardens. The remaining two key points are facts about the cyclone itself - how it was spotted and how people were warned. Because lives are more important than homes, let us take g as our next key point, followed by f which is about injuries: The amount of detail which we include in the story will depend on how much we feel our readers or listeners will want.
More than people homeless. In what order should we put the other key points? This sentence also tells the reader or listener that we have given the most important news. Government officials put emergency plans into operation.
Or we can tell it in descending order of importance of the key points, all the way down to the least newsworthy at the end. Three drowned and three killed by flying debris.
If you find any errors, correct them - then read it through again. We also changed the phrase "sustained considerable structural damage" to "were badly damaged".
We check for mistakes, and are satisfied that we have made none. There are no details yet of damage outside Honiara, and it may be difficult to get that information if telephone lines are down and roads flooded. More than 20 homes were destroyed and a number of other buildings were badly damaged.
In particular, we shall want the names of the six people who have been killed to publish in a newspaper report; but not in a broadcast report. The emergency services are still awaiting news from outlying districts.
Nadi meteorologists warn Solomon Islands government of approach of Cyclone Victor.
Only then can you hand it in. As in the intro, you must avoid overloading any sentence in your story with unnecessary words - remember the canoe.
You must choose a clear and simple sequence for telling the facts and giving relevant opinions. This must be included in our story. More than 20 homes destroyed and other buildings sustained considerable structural damage.
Is it interesting or significant? There are clearly lots of details which can be given here. In short, is this how you want to see the story in your newspaper or hear it read out on air?
Does your intro meet the six requirements we discussed at the end of the previous chapter? The emergency services are still awaiting news from outlying districts but believe that Honiara has been the worst hit.
Solomon Islanders themselves warned of approaching cyclone. Cyclone Victor was first detected at 2 a.This is the end of Part 1 of this two-part section on writing the news story. If you now want to discover some of the golden rules of writing the news story, follow this link to the second section, Chapter 7: Writing the news story - clear writing.
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For example, you can start with a simple plot like, your main character has to deal with bad news or your main character 71%(). The inverted pyramid is the model for news writing. It simply means that the heaviest or most important information should be at the top – the beginning – of your story, and the least important information should go at the bottom.
News writing is an essential skill for journalists. Learn about the five Ws (Who, What, When, Where and Why) that every story should address. ¾ Sums up the story 2.
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Writing a TV news script is a lot harder than you might think. Even those skilled in journalism struggle if they have to turn a story meant to be read into a tight script that needs to be heard.
However, you can perfect your TV news writing style if .Download